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docs/community/contributing.md (1)
53-58:⚠️ Potential issue | 🟡 MinorAdd a brief note to set up the
upstreamremote before rebase.
git fetch upstream mainassumes an existingupstreamremote; many first-time contributors won’t have it. Add a short setup snippet or a conditional note to prevent confusion.✏️ Suggested doc tweak
If needed, rebase to the current `main` before submitting your pull request: ```shell +git remote add upstream git@github.com:ironcore-dev/<repository>.git git fetch upstream main git rebase upstream/main</details> </blockquote></details> </blockquote></details>🤖 Fix all issues with AI agents
In `@docs/iaas/architecture/networking.md`: - Line 30: Fix the wording in the documentation entry for the "apinetlet" component: change the phrase "responsible from translating" to "responsible for translating" in the sentence that describes apinetlet translating user-facing API objects from the `networking` resource group into the internal representation used by `ironcore-net` so the preposition is correct. - Line 71: Fix the duplicated article in the sentence referencing MachineRuntime by removing the extra "the" so it reads "the corresponding `AttachNetworkInterface`"; update the text that currently reads "the corresponding the `AttachNetworkInterface`" to "the corresponding `AttachNetworkInterface`" in the docs line that mentions the `AttachNetworkInterface` method on the `MachineRuntime` interface. - Line 27: Update the phrase "network related decisions" in the text to the hyphenated compound adjective "network-related decisions" so the compound adjective correctly precedes the noun; locate the occurrence in the line containing "the place where all network related decisions like reservation of unique IP addresses, allocation of unique network IDs, etc. are made." and replace it with "network-related decisions". - Line 84: Change the verb to match the singular subject "the `metalnetlet`": update the sentence so the `metalnetlet` "creates" (not "create") the corresponding `LoadBalancer` or `NATGateway` objects in the `metalnet` API, i.e., replace "and create the corresponding `LoadBalancer` or `NATGateway` objects in the `metalnet` API." with "and creates the corresponding `LoadBalancer` or `NATGateway` objects in the `metalnet` API." In `@docs/iaas/architecture/providers/ceph-provider.md`: - Around line 10-12: Remove the duplicated article "A" between the two sentences describing the ceph-volume-provider: edit the sentence that currently reads "A A `CreateVolume` IRI call..." so it becomes a single "A `CreateVolume` IRI call..." (reference strings: "ceph-volume-provider" and "`CreateVolume` IRI") to eliminate the double "A" and keep the sentence grammatically correct. In `@docs/iaas/architecture/scheduling.md`: - Around line 14-16: Replace the unhyphenated phrase "network related components" with "network-related components" in the scheduling doc; search for the exact string "network related components" (in the paragraph that mentions the `networking` API and the [networking section]) and update it to use the hyphenated form. In `@docs/iaas/usage-guides/storage.md`: - Around line 86-88: Replace all inconsistent casings of the provider field so the docs use the API's actual field name providerId (camelCase) everywhere; update occurrences of providerID and ProviderID to providerId in the VolumePool and BucketPool sections (and any other mentions around the noted locations) so examples, descriptions, and field lists consistently reference providerId.🧹 Nitpick comments (4)
docs/overview/index.md (1)
9-9: Consider hyphenating compound adjectives.When "bare metal management" and "network automation" are used attributively to modify "layers", standard English style guides recommend hyphenation: "bare-metal management" and "network-automation". This would read: "The bare-metal management and network-automation layers belong to..."
However, if your style guide treats these as proper names that remain unhyphenated even when used attributively, the current form is acceptable.
📝 Optional edit for compound adjective hyphenation
-The following diagram shows IronCore's two layers. The bare metal management and network automation layers +The following diagram shows IronCore's two layers. The bare-metal management and network-automation layersdocs/baremetal/architecture/maintenance.md (1)
5-6: Reconsider removing the bullet list formatting.The markdown list formatting was removed from the TODO items. Keeping these as a bulleted list would improve readability and make it clearer that these are distinct action items.
♻️ Restore bullet list formatting
TODO: -- Describe the maintenance process -- Describe the extension points here +- Describe the maintenance process +- Describe the extension points heredocs/iaas/kubernetes/csi-driver.md (1)
50-109: Editorial improvements enhance consistency.The capitalization of method names and resource types (e.g.,
CreateVolume,Volume,Node) aligns with Kubernetes documentation conventions and improves readability.Optional: Consider varying repetitive phrasing.
The phrase "is called when a volume needs to be" appears in lines 70, 78, 89, 96, and 105. Consider rephrasing some instances for variety, such as:
- "is invoked to"
- "handles the task of"
- "is triggered when"
This is a minor stylistic suggestion and does not affect technical accuracy.
docs/iaas/kubernetes/cloud-controller-manager.md (1)
40-40: Optional: Consider hyphenating "cloud-provider-specific."The phrase "cloud provider specific APIs" could use a hyphen: "cloud-provider-specific APIs" to form a compound adjective. This is a minor stylistic suggestion.
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